You are having some trouble with a work colleague. Write to your employer. In your letter:
explain what the problem is
describe how it is affecting you
make a suggestion about what could be done.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to an issue I am facing with Mr. Aakash.
Although Mr. Aakash is an experienced engineer, he has a careless attitude towards work. As I have worked with him in a team on different projects, I have to work for extra hours to complete his work because of his negligent behavior. I have told him that he should complete his work himself but he does not listen to me as I am junior to him. The worst part of working with him is that he does not appreciate my hard work and takes all the credit.
Due to this extra burden of his work, I have to do overtime and therefore, cannot reach home on time. The work pressure has also started affecting my health as well as my family life. In addition, my mother seems not well these days and she needs extra care.
To resolve this issue, I request you to talk to him. Since you are superior to him, he cannot neglect your orders.
I hope you will understand my situation and do the needful at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Deepika Sharma.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34764851735 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9910700046 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162293014043 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632836192234 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365038792343 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806161603714 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315685165792 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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