In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In some nations, in spite of a decline in the number of severe offenses, the citizens feel more scared as compared to the past. The primary cause of this phenomenon is the chance of first-time offenders can commit crimes after their imprisonment. The most practical solution to train criminals for suitable jobs and have close supervision on them to deter them from committing crimes.
To begin with, the major cause of this fear among the general public is the probability of re-offense by first-time criminals. This is because of a lack of rehabilitation and a lack of opportunities for offenders to learn new skills during their imprisonment.
When criminals are released from jail, society does not accept them as citizens because of the stigma associated with them and also the employers will not give them work because they do not want to deploy anyone from a criminal background. Consequently, they feel isolated from society and lack of financial stability leads them back to crime.
There are two effective solutions to tackle this problem, firstly the government needs to ensure that all the prisoners are given the chance to retrain with some useful skills which will help them to secure some job and make them financially independent. It will help them to feel content and independent and help them to be a part of society. Secondly, there should be more checks and supervision to impede the offenders from indulging in crime. This supervision will also make society fearless and secure.
In conclusion, people feel frightened because of the chance of criminals again commit crimes after their sentence. The most effective solution is to train them in imprisonment and close supervision will make people feel safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... the major cause of this fear among the general public is the probability of re-offense by fir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78560742184 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503521126761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8286277062 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117164240679 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504989441955 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253679240751 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731810472148 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287678166799 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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