Nowadays, it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries. Is this a positive or negative development?
As the economic development, traveling abroad is cheaper than before, and we have more approaches to go abroad. As my opinion, it is a positive trend because it is a effective way to transport different culture and contribute to financial develop.
on the one hand, traveling abroad is benefical for cultural communication. This is because people can deeply know the local custom when they come to a new country. As the same time, they will transport their own culture. For example, before tourists go to other country, most of them will search the famous tourist attractions on the internet in advance. During the time, they can learn the special of the country and why the it is popular. If they go the place as they planed, they will meet some local people. The different culture will be discuss during they communicate with each other.
On the other hand, this trend can increase incomes of the related companies, which is contributed to economic development. If people choose to stay at home every day, there will be a significant decrease in the whole markets. The expense items of going to a country are containg the flight, the hotel and so on. In addition, When they are in a completly new situation, they can not resist the desire to shopping. Therefore, it is a huge incomes for the visited counties excepte the money of travel.
In conclusion, no matter the tourists' counties or the visited countries, the trend of traveling on the foreign counties has a positive effect on both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82625482625 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6873474445 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3263405689 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172876218326 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542319072205 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429069934295 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106477802675 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110346521115 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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