Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher.
Following his advise, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say.
What is your motivation to learn a new language
How can the teacher help you?
When will you be ready to start?
Dear Mrs Johnson,
I am writing in reference to learning French which has been suggested by my master Mr Rajesh Khanna and he suggested me to take your help regarding the same.
Let me explain to you in detail. I am working with a MNC and we have a deal with our French counterparts coming up. Fortunately I am the one leading the deal so my friend and advisor Mr Khana suggested me to get hold of French as it could be useful for our deal.
I would be great full to you if you can help me out by suggesting ways which can be beneficial in mastering the dialect. Since I want grasp the language quickly, I would like to receive a crash course from you if possible.
I would like to start it as early as possible as the meeting is due next month and I have to master the language before that.
Thank you for your consideration.
Your’s Faithfully,
Kutub Udaipurwala.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...a and he suggested me to take your help regarding the same. Let me explain to you in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56707317073 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64880603455 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0572857377 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20394137868 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997179870207 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810008702109 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12109968873 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785988204552 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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