1. Some people believe that technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many people agree the advancement in technology is a medium for social interaction among people, whereas others believe that with the use of technology humans are becoming less sociable. In my opinion, I do believe the development in technology has paved way for people to be more extrovert and socially active.
Many individuals have this opinion that with the use of internet facilities and many social networking applications has made possible for people to interact with their loved ones and friends living in any part of the world. To be more precise, hi-tech applications has removed the barrio of geographical boundary among the nation as many businesses and giant organisations can carry out their business meeting though video conference, thus saving the time and money on travel. To elucidate, social networking websites like Facebook, Skype has made it easy for people talk to their family members sharing their ideas, feeling and emotions.
However, some people have this notion that with the advancements in computers children are becoming introvert, spending most of their time playing video games or watching movies. To simply state excess use of technology deprives of real human interaction, which is an important aspect of every bond. To illustrate, according to the research report of World Health Organisation in 2018 states the more the 50% of the young generations do not indulge in physical activities such as playing football, cricket, instead are more interested to play online games, as a result it not only affects their cognitive development but also leads to health issues like obesity, diabetic problems, weak eyesight and so on.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that modern technology has made individuals to be more interactive as well as build a strong communication and bond among the humanity.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, well, whereas, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29452054795 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8412606787 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6720428359 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.777777778 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19039430428 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084133922161 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571800250045 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124203861396 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637360141952 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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