Line graph : Consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers.
The line graph exhibits the amount of consumption of fast food pizza , humbergers and fish and chips which were consumed by Australian teenagers from 1979 to 2000.Overall, consumption of pizza , fish and chips saw a surge ,while consumption of pizza slump over the period presented.
Regarding consumption of fast food involving pizza, there began higher than consumption of hamburgers, fish and chips , with a whopping 300 grams per week in 1970. this number plunged considerably to almost 200 grams per week in 1990.
Turning to consumption of fish and chips was higher than consumption of hamburgers, with nearly 80 grams per week in 1970. before escalating dramatically to almost 500 grams per week in 1990,the quantity of fish and chips consumption was shrink , hit 150 grams per week in 1980. between 1970 and 1990 , there was a noticeable soared in the amount of fish and chips cosumption
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...amount of consumption of fast food pizza , humbergers and fish and chips which we...
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...od pizza , humbergers and fish and chips which were consumed by Australian teenag...
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... Australian teenagers from 1979 to 2000.Overall, consumption of pizza , fish and chips ...
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...79 to 2000.Overall, consumption of pizza , fish and chips saw a surge ,while consu...
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... pizza slump over the period presented. Regarding consumption of fast food invo...
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...he period presented. Regarding consumption of fast food involving pizza...
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...onsumption of hamburgers, fish and chips , with a whopping 300 grams per week in 1...
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... a whopping 300 grams per week in 1970. this number plunged considerably to almost 2...
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...y to almost 200 grams per week in 1990. Turning to consumption of fish and chips...
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...her than consumption of hamburgers, with nearly 80 grams per week in 1970. before...
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...of fish and chips consumption was shrink , hit 150 grams per week in 1980. between...
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... per week in 1980. between 1970 and 1990 , there was a noticeable soared in the a...
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... the amount of fish and chips cosumption
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8629535047 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.114283051 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219671746655 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10754047809 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113599205987 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173075230467 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102996212148 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.