You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
- explain what caused the damage
- why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- what needs to be done to fix it?
Dear Mr Pattinson,
I am writing this letter to inform you that the bad weather condition had been detrimental to the house where I am staying as a tenant along with my family for the last one year.
last night; the heavy rains and fierce storms has broken many windows of my house. Moreover, the broken tree branches have not only wrecked the main entrance door of the house completely, but also have damaged the furniture, walls and flooring by entering through the shattered windows.
The freezing winds and rains are entering through the smashed windows thus making it unbearable to stay for my family especially my son who is five years old. Furthermore, the main front door is jammed, the furniture is broken and the plaster of the walls is falling off because of the broken branches, as a result, it is impossible to open the door and move out of the house.
I would request you to kindly arrange a carpenter for repairing the damages caused to windows, furniture and the main door of the house, Additionally, please send the painter also to repair the damaged walls.
I hope you will understand the seriousness of the situation and will take immediate actions. Please do let me know if you need my assistance in any way?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...ith my family for the last one year. last night; the heavy rains and fierce storm...
^^^^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79912663755 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54460409715 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0183779032 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139355914776 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536421439523 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465500132299 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725914483973 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461286657951 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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