Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher.
Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say:
What is your motivation to learn a new language?
How can the teacher help you?
When will you be ready to start?
I am writing to inform you that based on the advise of my guide Me Smith, I would like to enrol in one of your crash course on French as I embark on a journey to French next month.
Let me explain to you in detail. I am a travel professional who conducts tour to different countries in the world. After exploring the countries in Asia, I wanted to shift my focus to Europe. Therefor, after a lot of research I have finalised France as my next destination.
Although I have a basic knowledge of French, I want to master the language with your expertise. As I have researched that French like to communicate mostly in their mother tongue. Being a tour guide I would be able to understand it completely to make my trip memorable. I would like you to assist me with more complex words that compromise the French vocabulary.
Would you kindly consider me in one of your batches that starts from next week? So that I am well equipped with French before my journey commences.
Hope you will consider my request favourably.
Your’s Faithfully
Kutub.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... am writing to inform you that based on the advise of my guide Me Smith, I would like to e...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...writing to inform you that based on the advise of my guide Me Smith, I would like to e...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aster the language with your expertise. As I have researched that French like to c...
^^
Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our batches that starts from next week? So that I am well equipped with French before m...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71957671958 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866125209 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7025847273 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153720152353 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627915782939 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615455666429 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972401386064 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227717517379 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.