Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Sir,
Last month I have contacted your company for the renovation of my apartment kitchen. While placing an order I had given clear list of all those items that needs replacement. Just for reminder, these were the items. Firstly, kitchen drawers were old, so need complete change. Secondly, as the paint were coming out from the walls, I had requested complete new painting. Finally, gas stove require some repair or complete change based on the inspection by your company worker. However, I am disappointed for the services that I had received. This is the reason, I am writing to you now to show my dissatisfaction.
These are some of the problems we had encountered in the kitchen when we moved yesterday. First and foremost, some of the drawers were not properly installed. Moreover, my kitchen is being painted with Pink colour whereas while placing my order I had clearly mentioned for off-white color; probably order is completely mixed with another order. Last but not the least, gas stove is being installed of some local company whereas I had requested for Town gas. Additionally, I have been charged for town gas while preparing the complete invoice.
I need your urgent help to look into this matter and arrange for quick fixes by your company workers as I am totally disappointed. Moreover, I need some adjustment in the final invoice as I am wrongly billed for higher price.
Looking forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours Faithfully
Yash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Last month I have contact...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the renovation of my apartment kitchen. While placing an order I had given clear list...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...show my dissatisfaction. These are some of the problems we had encountered in the kitc...
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Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...we moved yesterday. First and foremost, some of the drawers were not properly installed. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04858299595 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67697377558 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7247312087 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0502369752349 0.216113520407 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219661538637 0.0766984524023 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323765893951 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422002851721 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284593590197 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.