nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy .do you think its advantage of outweigh disadvantage?
In the modern era, goods of merchant are affordable to purchase has become an essential part of our everyday life.There are those who say that things are cheaper to buy is good for the society, however others believe that this has drawback for environment in this essay I will examine the more benefits rather than disadvantages of this argument and provide my overall opinion.
Perhaps ,the primary marit is that no one suffers from hunger.Every one get easily basic amenities like food.For example,there are lots of people who live in below poverty line. In my country the never sleep hungry if basic needs the easily by the fulfill that children needs.
Furthermore,If things are cheap in the market so definitely people have more choices. For example milk is basic need for everyone and in the market prices less of milk so more people courage to do business of milk.Their fear is less of not selling because milk rate are low so people most to purchase apart from that milk items are also low prices.
However, low prices item has also some demerits which is harmful for environment .For instance ,if grain prices are very low then layman purchased more than their needs and their percentage of grain the wastage because after one time their grain become spoil .Then definitely they throw in dustbin and their waste more fields soil.
In conclusion, it must be said that low prices of things has clearly many advantages and some disadvantages.My personal view is that only basic things like grains and some use says of monotony life cosmetics only have easily purchase. If all things are easily by then definitely amount of waste is high.
- the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. 78
- Thr graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 in 2007. 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 75
- The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92170818505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47727734178 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.940350651 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.875 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788049506674 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316935914898 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309926216414 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417851616393 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324515381126 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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