You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing.
In your letter,
• tell your friend about the party
• ask for the recipe
• explain why you need the recipe from his/her country.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Julie,
Hello, how are you? It has been a long time since we last spoke or met and I hope you and your family are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to ask about the recipe of a dish from your country as I want to include the same in the party that I am organising.
Last week, I have shifted to a new house as the place I was living earlier was far away from my office so I want a home that is closer to my job. I am organising a house warming dinner party on 25th September and have invited all my friends and family to the party.
I remember when I spend my holidays with you and your family at your place last month, you cooked Hyderabadi Biryani for everyone. It was very delicious and I have decided to include that dish in my party as most of my friends are from India and I am sure they will love to have the scrumptious and succulent biryani. would you to please send me the step by step recipe for making Hyderabadi Biryani?
I would like my Indian friends to enjoy the taste of biryani, moreover, I want some of my foreigner friends to have the fabulous experience of taste of the Indian cuisine.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care and see you soon.
Warm wishes,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
... the scrumptious and succulent biryani. would you to please send me the step by step ...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Warm wishes, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23849372385 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24222502142 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8368159988 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369982075207 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128746547368 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567675485974 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183076481634 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720128896366 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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