how to balance your job responsibilities and personal interests
It is true that jobs and personal interests play an irreplaceable role in our own life journey, thus how to maintain their balance have been considered as a tough crisis. This universal consistency among sociologists indisputably demonstrates an immutably principle of this topic: learning how to spend your time is fundamental to keep these well.
People will only become highly motivated to fulfill their own job responsibilities when they stay dedicated in the pursuit of individual interests. Moreover, timing management steers us toward a glamorous future and therefore fosters a sense of subjective initiative to acquire a decisive approach which can juggle work and life, the significance of which seems self-evident. Otherwise, whether our job responsibilities and personal interests can be balanced, meaning and rewarding largely depends on how one deals with twists and turns along the way.
In conclusion, in this ever-changing world where individualism prevails, learning control your time and correct your attitude have positive repercussions for your job and life’s balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69512195122 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27674553071 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.337899115 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36247868706 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148535160926 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097805811384 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210071128098 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410182335506 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.06136585366 133% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.