You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to
go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do
about it.
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM ABOUT THE DELAY IN RETURNING THE BOOKS FROM THE DATE AS EXPECTED ON.
A WEEK AGO, I HAD ISSUED TWO SCIENCE REFERENCES, BY AUTHOR J. RAMNATH FROM OUR LIBRARY. I WAS INSTRUCTED TO DEPOSIT THEM BACK AFTER 10 DAYS I.E. 10/11/19.
UNFORTUNATELY, I RECEIVED A PHONE CALL THIS MORNING FROM MY PARENTS STATING THAT MY GRANDMOTHER IS ON CRITICAL STAGE OF HER LIFE. DOCTORS HAVE SAID THAT SHE MAY LEAVE US SOON. IN SUCH CIRCUMSTANCES, MY FAMILY SEEKS FOR SOME MORAL AND EMOTIONAL SUPPORT FROM ME.THEREFORE, I AM BOUND TO GO AND VISIT THEM.
I UNDERSTAND THAT MY PERSONAL SITUATIONS SHOULDN’T BE MY REASONS TO BREAK THE RULES OF THE INSTITUTION, BUT I REQUEST YOU TO CONSIDER THIS FOR THE FIRST AND LAST TIME. IN ADDITION TO THIS I PROMISE TO RETURN THE BOOK BY THIS SATURDAY I.E. 18/11/19. I ALSO ADMIT TO BEAR THE PENALTY CHARGES FOR THE SAME.
I AM SO SORRY FOR THIS INCONVENIENCE CAUSED AND I HOPE YOU WILL TAKE MY APPOLOGY INTO CONSIDERATION.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
AMAN SHARMA
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| 2019-11-15 | Aqsa Afzal | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72375690608 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88427423807 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3822640411 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156212359953 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525422338944 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403910032893 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800115902756 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208674529663 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.