In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
ESCALATION IN THE OCCURRENCE OF UNLAWFUL ACT HAS BECOME THE MAJOR CONCERN IN MOST REGIONS. UPLIFMENT IN THE NUMBER OF EVENTS IS DUE TO VARIED REASONS. THIS ESSAY WILL HIGHLIGHT THE FACTORS RESPONSIBLE FOR OFFENCE AND SUGGEST FEW SOLUTIONS TO DETER ITS FREQUENCY.
FIRST AND FOREMOST, THE LENIENCY IN THE JURISDICTION FOR ILLEGAL EVENTS IS A MAJOR FACTOR FOR THEIR ENHANCEMENT. THE PUNISHMENT AGAINST THE WRONG DOER IS EITHER VERY FLEXIBLE OR IS ISSUED AFTER A LONG PERIOD OF TIME. AS A RESULT OF THIS, THE PROSECUTOR ISN’T BURDENED OR MADE TO FEEL GUILTY AT A GREATER EXTENT AND HE/SHE MAY RE-ATTEMPT THE OFFENCE. SECONDLY, INSUFFICIENT SECURITY FOR THE PUBLIC MAKES IT ACCESSIBLE TO THREAT. THE VICTIMS AREN’T ARMED OR PROTECTED IN MOST OF THE CRIME SCENES. IN OTHER WORDS, ABSENCE OR LACK OF SECURITY GUARDS AT PUBLIC PROPERTIES, VIDEO SURVELLIANCE AT EVERY CORNER OF THE CITY AND POLICE PROTECTION AT OFFENCE FAVOURABLE AREAS ACTS AS MAGNETS TO THE CRIMINALS. THIRDLY, MAJORITY OF THE CULPRITS LACK NORMAL VALUES AND ATTIQETES. THEREFORE, ABSENCE OF MORAL EDUCATION ACTS AS A BURING FACTOR IN THIS SCENARIO.
ACCORDING TO THE PRECEEDING PARAGRAPH THIS ISSUE IS A COMPLICATED ONE. HOWEVER THERE IS ROOM FOR OPTIMISM. HANDFUL OF PRECAUTIONS AND BUNDLES OF AWARENESS DRIVE CAN HELP TO VANDALISE THE ROOT CAUSE OF UNLAWFUL ACTS ITSELF. JURISDICTION OF THE COUNTRY CAN PLAY A MAJOR ROLE IN BRINGING POSITIVE RESULTS. ADHERING TO ISSUE STRICT RULES,FAST TRACKING THE COURT PROCEDURES AND SCRUTINISING SUCH CASES CAN CAUSE HUGE PRESSURE AMONG THE CULPRITS. THEY MAY BE INTIMIDATED EVEN BEFORE THINKING TO PERFORM SOMETHING AGAINST THE LAW. IN ADDITION TO THIS, AWARENESS AND APPROPRIATE EDUCATION MAY ACTS AS A POSITIVE WAY OF FUTURE. MORAL VALUES,DIFFERENCE BETWEEN GOOD AND BAD DEEDS AND RESPECTING THE FELLOW MEMBERS OF THE SOCIETY SHOULD BE TAUGHT FROM THE PRIMARY LEVEL ITSELF. ACCORDING TO A SURVEY CONDUCTED BY CRIME BRANCH OF INDIA, MAJORITY OF THE PROSECUTORS THAT WERE UNDER THEIR DEPARTMENT WERE NEVER PREACHED ABOUT BASIC MANNERS AND ATTIQUETS. LASTLY, INCREASE IN THE SECURITY CAN DEGRADE THE POSSIBILITY OF CRIME SCENES. CCTV SHOULD BE INSTALLED AT EVERY POSSIBLE ROAD OF THE CITY,GUARDS SHOULD BE APPOINTED AT ALMOST EACH PUBLIC PROPERTY AND POLICE PATROLISATION SHOULD BECOME A DAILY AFFAIR.
ALMOST EVERYDAY WE READ IN NEWSPAPERS ABOUT HUGE NUMBER OF CRIMES HAPPENING ALL OVER THE COUNTRY, THIS HAS REMARKABLY INCREASED WIT TIME. NEVERTHELESS, PROMPT ACTIONS AND WIDE AWARENESS CAN ACT AS ROOM FOR POSITIVITY.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'PERIOD'.
Suggestion: PERIOD
...VERY FLEXIBLE OR IS ISSUED AFTER A LONG PERIOD OF TIME. AS A RESULT OF THIS, THE PROSECUTOR IS...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... MADE TO FEEL GUILTY AT A GREATER EXTENT AND HE/SHE MAY RE-ATTEMPT THE OFFENCE. S...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: HOWEVER,
...AGRAPH THIS ISSUE IS A COMPLICATED ONE. HOWEVER THERE IS ROOM FOR OPTIMISM. HANDFUL OF ...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , FAST
... RESULTS. ADHERING TO ISSUE STRICT RULES,FAST TRACKING THE COURT PROCEDURES AND SCRUT...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , DIFFERENCE
...S A POSITIVE WAY OF FUTURE. MORAL VALUES,DIFFERENCE BETWEEN GOOD AND BAD DEEDS AND RESPECTI...
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Line 5, column 1079, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , GUARDS
...ALLED AT EVERY POSSIBLE ROAD OF THE CITY,GUARDS SHOULD BE APPOINTED AT ALMOST EACH PUBL...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in addition, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29207920792 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89767238393 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576732673267 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3691086173 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963049604335 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259075050087 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383933734974 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546673736104 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464599253969 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.