In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?
How to reduce the crime rate? A question every government struggle to answer it. Many governments are trying to address this question by building bigger and bigger prisons but yet ineffective. This essay discusses the reason for such a rise in the crime rate while also shedding some light over the possible solutions.
Crimes have paralyzed the daily life of a common man. One of the primary reasons is an increase in poverty. In this modern era, it is quite difficult for a poor person to meet his necessities and sometimes it even leaves him and his children hungry. For instance, the rise in violent crimes can be easily seen in developing countries, especially in Africa. Another reason is an increase in violent games, cartoon and movies. It can be seen often in a movie that a boy goes on a rampage to get the love of his life. These examples leave negativity on a kid’s mind and in return, he tries to follow it. Finally, most sophisticated yet most dangerous version is web crime. Not only technology has given birth to a sophisticated and reliable life but also has provided new fraudulent ways. For example, Dark web, where all the criminals such as hackers, kidnappers, and etc. trade their illegal activities in cryptographic currency.
Mild crimes are turning into ferocious crimes with soft punishment which most of the governments are offering. For example, sentencing prison to a criminal for few years does not create fear into other beings. The punishment happens behind the curtain and the person returns after a time. To tackle this, criminals should face hard punishments and in front of the public which will create fear among people and they will think twice before committing a grave sin. Alternatively, the government should also take proper measures to tackle poverty and create a safe environment where foreign and local investment can be welcomed.
In conclusion, it is very unfortunate that felonies are increasing day by day in this modern society. In my opinion, the government should take proper measures to counter it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... criminals such as hackers, kidnappers, and etc. trade their illegal activities in crypt...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98260869565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73058247547 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9995695567 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1363636364 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6818181818 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121670489743 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363685157789 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559482034492 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645484772158 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379953071034 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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