Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is argued that music is the better way to bring people of various cultures and age’s together. This essay totally disagree with this statement, because different cultures different languages, also the content of some music are not suitable for all ages.
Music is not the better way to bring people of different cultures together as the languages defers form culture to another. That is to say that, in order to transmit the content of music to other cultures they have to understand it first so they can react with it. Moreover, to be that bridge between cultures is to have music with a language that can be understandable by all. For example, Russian music cannot be understandable by other cultures like Arab people or European people.
The content of some music are meant only for a specific age range. In other word, people who are over 18 years can be able to listen to different music while some content of those music are not suitable for people under 18 years old. In addition, some music from the oldies might not be liked by the younger generation as its not in their preferences and they are more into the new ones as the can understands its content. For instance, as per a survey conducted by Music world Magazine, 45 % for young people don’t like to listen to old music as its content not understandable for them.
In conclusion, I believe that to bring people from different cultures and ages together by music is not the better way, because of language which will be the first challenge in addition to the content of the music which will play a role as well on that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'those musics'?
Suggestion: this music; those musics
...o different music while some content of those music are not suitable for people under 18 ye...
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Line 13, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which will play a role as well on that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70318021201 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53662910275 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462897526502 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5188895651 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347929641249 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167436101637 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903480926282 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257933979481 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807152967998 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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