Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy with everything organized and at correct place. What is your opinion about this?
An organised person is seen to climb ladder of success with more efficiency and much sooner than others. It is perceived by many that keeping your nearby area, both at ones house or place of work, clean and systematically organised is considered to very vital. I, definitely, carry a positive opinion about the above mentioned idea as it saves from bad diseases and faulty habits, eventually, leading to passive lifestyle. As well as , it certainly a very crucial factor in shaping up one’s character
To begin with, admittedly, keeping objects free from dust and germs and at their assigned places is an elementary act for living being’s health. It saves them from falling prey to diseases like dust allergies or breathing problems or accidentally injuring themselves from objects lying in a dis-organised manner on floor. Certain mal habits like laziness or lethargy can be the end result of not keeping oneself in order. On contrary, being rightly arranged not only keeps us mobile. It in turn, helps to do our work with right pace. Thus, saving the time and contributing to being more productive on professional front. To illustrate, an organisation in China conducted a survey within their office. They found 39% employees to be much active and giving amazing result just by keeping their surroundings precisely office-desk clean and organised.
Another significant link to the above stated notion is, inculcation of such things as a part of their lifestyle transforms person’s personality for good. Furthermore, it adds greater moral values in individual’s life which shape up their character. An organised person gradually catches the essence of being discipline in life alongside. With regard to it, he/she may leave lasting influence on their siblings or younger one in society. Additionally, he/she may lead happy and stress free life covering wider aspects of it like mentally, socially, morally and professionally to state some. To illustrate, my grand-father was very organised and self-groomed person since childhood. Because of his such principles he was able to fetch a job for himself at a very age in his time.
To conclude, putting things in their designated place and tidy, both within one’s premises or outside at job front is considered to be the guiding path a to sustain a healthy life. And also considered as an influential member of the human society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, as well as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24484536082 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00334092315 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621134020619 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6739971053 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104019384851 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287756344321 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350324811584 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656103130618 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374284987621 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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