Some people say that it is important to keep our home and workplace tidy with everything organized and at correct place. what is your opinion about this?
Cleanliness is the significant criteria when health and hygiene is discussed. Some dwellers ponder that keeping the house and work area tidy should be the self responsibility. I firmly believe in it, as this locates everything at their perfect places and it attracts everyone's attention too.
Tidy ness is the sign that a person is giving ample of importance to hygiene. Unclean food plates or the latter in the kitchen brings in health issues.Adding,this signifies that they want everything organized specifically. For example, if a pen is not kept properly at its place after the use than there are chances that it can get missing, next time when it is required. Thus,Organising things in an order or at definite place is highly recommended.
However, for some people, it is not important to keep everything at proper places as one would find them surely, when needed. Such people portray a tendency who overlooks the value of time. It cannot be denied that improper maintenance needs huge time investment every time. For instance, in a recent study published by a well-known magazine, it was stated that 39% people waste more time in finding things that are not kept correctly. Hence, by keeping everything organized, one saves time and can use in some other task.
To close, in my opinion, clean things are better than untidy looking latter. Things that are organised are better then involving time in finding the same thing again and again which ultimately is a time waste. Thus, cleanliness and proper organizations of house or work things is indeed, highly required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04198473282 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84658371864 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0869850046 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198925787276 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649398788497 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537900593902 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118203775577 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503722150031 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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