In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Globalisation has hit every aspect of humanity in the most significant way as compared to the past. Everyone wants to be up to date with the latest trends going on in terms of clothes and even their hair styles. In my opinion, this is a positive development as everyone can benefit from being fashionable.
In today's world, style, looks and fashion holds the utmost importance. People around the globe are familiar with the trends going on in different parts of the world, first, due to social media and secondly due to online shopping which is available from different apps constituting from varied economies. For instance, it was declared in one of the fashion magazines that about 75℅ of public likes to be trendy. Although online shopping helps to have the style of their choice. Also, it becomes readily available to people just by being at ones native place and not spending any money for going to shop outside.
On the other hand, it is believed by many that life is too short for being with the similar kind of hair styles and hair colours. People, these days spend immensely on salon irrespective of the gender consideration. It was observed in one of the recent survey that almost 58% of people keep trying different hair cuts and hair colours in 2-5 months duration. This gives them happiness and helps them to stand different from the rest.
To close, no one has remained untouched from the latest and upcoming fashion statement. In the race of looking better than others have made people more stylish when compared to past few decades. I strongly agree that people and society should be up to date with fashion. This would make them different as well as happier in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...about 75℅ of public likes to be trendy. Although online shopping helps to have the style...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77288135593 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44245227408 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3217043756 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215459709431 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657289678931 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438710344217 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127627620257 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205043983742 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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