you are applying for a job, write a letter to your former teacher asking for a reference letter.
Give details of your job
explain why it is important to you
mention which details need to be included
Dear Madam,
I hope you are doing good. My name is Ritu. I am a student of our esteemed institution from 2012 to 2015 and I pursued a Masters of Business Communication. I am writing to seek a reference letter to apply for a job opening in Amazon Pvt. Ltd.
Amazon is my dream organization. If I am employed there as a senior finance manager, I will gain exposure to great learning opportunities and career growth .The responsibility of the job is to plan and suppress the financial outburst of this organization. In order to open the gates of my dream, I need a referral letter mentioning my course details.
Henceforth, could you please provide a letter stating the behavioral conduct and medium of instruction during the period of study. I would be grateful if you could help me with this supportive document. Kindly, provide this information with your seal and designation. I have enclosed my details below.
Yours Faithfully,
Ritu.J
- Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views an 84
- some people watch sports on tv than playing sports it is a positive development or negative development 92
- Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their hand writing skills Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages of this trend 75
- Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...learning opportunities and career growth .The responsibility of the job is to plan...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...arning opportunities and career growth .The responsibility of the job is to plan an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22916397849 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5831822866 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208999815227 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642092559978 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047527051303 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118189593297 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462540986771 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.