Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
old people's recommendations can play a prominent role in younger generations. they can be accepted by teenagers in some situations but they cannot form their future and be like the rules which have punishment.
On the one side, some people argue that advice offered by parents illustrates children’s way. parents act as the most significant role in children’s life and they have been concerned about them in this cruel world from the cradle to the grave. teenagers are in a vitally important milestone and a detour can destroy their plans. For instance, about studying if job positions and curriculum of the major can be recognized by the old people who care about the teenager, they will select the best choice and reach higher levels of education and access better job opportunities. Therefore, children should benefit the recommendations since adult people always wish the best for them and have more experience.
On the flip side, some people believe that younger generations can deny old people’s advice. they have the right to live independent and decide everything that they prefer. Furthermore, they have to embrace and experience a living that is better in their opinion. For example, many students know the state-of-the-art world and the requirements better than the older because they grow up with technology and the parents do not understand them. if they are not permitted to pick what they want up, they will be like a loser in the near future. Besides, many decisions can create the personality and they can a neat way to broaden the horizons. Thus, the decisions should be taken by teenagers.
In conclusion, humans have the right to make a decision. Although the older people have seen the majority aspects of the life, teenagers should go in their way finally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11148648649 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91908900593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3780919176 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149603821721 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555132366004 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518413274086 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107931134108 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279525183197 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.