Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Stand in the view point of an educator, it is the best if we can bring the students who can navigate in the academic field and also know how to explore the world other than academics. So the universities and colleges should provide the same financial support as they do for bring students better class and library resources.
Schools should fund students in education for sure, while the academic is not the only type of education. It is normal for educators or parents to enthusiastically provide young students for more courses and books, expecting them can be master in a certain field. However, only stress on students' achievement in academic can hinder the chance for them to fully discover their potential. If a student is not good at study any thing but good at sport, then the school should make sure they have prepare the equal amount of resources the student needs. Or else the student's talent would never have the chance to hone and shine. It would also be a huge lose for not only the school but the society.
Moreover, giving various educations for young students can help the schools cultivate the students who can fit into the society well. Since it takes more than just academic knowledge to be success in the society. It also takes mature social skills and abundant experiences of joining activities. For example, if there are two students enter one company at the same time, both of them have the expertise in engineering but only one of them know how to make good impression to people and how to team work with strangers. It is easy to imagine that the students with the skill set other than expertise would stand out, because all the other skills other than academics are as crucial to have as field knowledge. On the other hand, the student without the important skill set may be phased out eventually in that he doesn't have the ability to survive in the workforce. The society needs the people who are well-educated in multiple different way instead of only in field study. So the universities and colleges should sure put equal amount of money on both sides.
Some people may argue that supporting activities other than study might distract students from focus on school work. However, if the schools don't provide those resources, the students are going to create those by themselves. So it would still be better for schools to provide it.
All in all, the universities and colleges should absolutely provide equivalent financial support on both study and sport or social activities. In that way, the students can have plenty of chance to explore their knowledge in all different way and nurtured in a well-balanced educational environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87964989059 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57801114634 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455142231947 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2218345761 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.19047619 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111515482966 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397279573606 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594756342064 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791773134304 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395373005172 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.