Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
It is believed that these days people are getting presented with far too many choices in their life. I completely agree that overwhelming number of options are available to us and it has started to affect our life also.
Nowadays, the freedom to choose one from several available options has started to affect our performance. We are facing far too many options even for small tasks that we spend a lot of our time just thinking on what to choose. For instance, a small task of what to eat at Dinner has so many options available like which kind of food, from which cousine, to prepare at home, to eat outside or to order online. We have so many options that most of the time we spend about an hour just in selecting what to eat and from where to.
Coming to second place where choices are harming us is in the choice to select our courier. Today fresh scholl passout are presented with so many carrier options that without proper guidance they may select a wrong carrier. These days higher education is heavily dependant on the carrier choice and this decision had to be made before getting admitted to University or teaching institutes. By the time freshers come to know that they are not meant for what they are doing or learning, it is too late for them and they end up wasting several years of there life.
Although it could be argued that having many options to choose from help us to select what we truly want or what is suitable for us, but once the number of options available becomes too much it starts to hinder us in place of helping us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s and it has started to affect our life also. Nowadays, the freedom to choose one...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our courier. Today fresh scholl passout are presented with so many carrier optio...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
... These days higher education is heavily dependant on the carrier choice and this decision...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up wasting several years of there life. Although it could be argued that having ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4701754386 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23981158246 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9720489441 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186453907148 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734158723747 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631236180236 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114310907119 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314381690985 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.