You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
Our company held a full day meeting at your hotel last Friday and I would like to share some feedbacks with you on the service you provided.
First of all, I have to say that it is a gorgeous hotel with large meeting spaces. Professional facilities were all prepared in advance to ensure the meeting was going smoothly. Not to mention your considerable service, staffs were always around to serve the customer and meet their needs. Overall, it was a great experience for the participant.
However, there is one thing that I would like to bring to your attention, which is the lunch buffet. Since we are a large group, people who were at the end of the line waiting for food found themselves have not much food to eat and whatever left were already cold when it is their turn.
As a result, I would like to suggest that extra food were prepare, especially accommodating a big group like us.
I hope that my suggestion could be taken into consideration and look forward to speaking to you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Amanda Roberts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professional
...rgeous hotel with large meeting spaces. professional facilities were all prepared in advance...
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Line 17, column 54, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...I would like to suggest that extra food were prepare, especially accommodating a big...
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Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...ld like to suggest that extra food were prepare, especially accommodating a big group l...
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Line 21, column 78, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to speaking'.
Suggestion: to speaking
...ken into consideration and look forward to speak to you soon. Yours faithfully, ...
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Line 29, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Amanda Roberts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79894179894 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53532474451 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4659863891 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339324943745 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113134422255 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519940668058 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153294833274 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901462241066 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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