Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Money is the financial base of life. Some people believe that money is an important factor for happiness, while I think happy life is more than about money.
It is true that people could enjoy better life if they obtain more fortune. From grocery to clothes, every house supplies need to be exchange with money, not to mention travel or insurance, which will cost a lot more than the basic goods. Having more money may lead to a better life experience. For instance, richer people could afford more on transportation and accommodation while traveling. As a result, their trip will be more comfortable and relaxing, comparing to those who can only afford economic class and a budget hotel. In this circumstance, there is no doubt that money play an important role in the sense of happiness.
Nevertheless, money is definitely not the only factor than can bring happiness. First, being healthy is the first priority. Without being in good condition, people barely can enjoy anything, even if you are a millionaire. Take Steven Jobs for example, suffering from to spend the rest of his life with his family. Therefore, a happy life stars from a healthy life. In addition, happiness could also mean having a close relation with families, especially with your partner. People will feel happy if they know know there will always be someone who is willing to listen to them. For example, when I had a bad day at work, I complained to my dear husband and he was able to ease my anger and help me get rid of negative feeling. Then, that is the moment when I couldn't feel much happier.
In conclusion, happiness is not just about more money, it also means a healthy body and a close relation with people you love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7491638796 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55250783534 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4122546271 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330559508224 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10401174241 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756085162299 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223478577247 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549651647091 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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