The maps show the changes of Shalton village from 1910 and 2010.
The two maps illustrate Shalton village experienced some alterations between 1910 and 2010.
It is clear that the village considerably changed over the period shown with the development of new residential areas.
As can be seen from the maps, in 2010 all trees surrounding large house demolished to give way to new houses were chopped down. Meanwhile, a small road was opened to connect this accommodation area to London Road. In addition, there were four houses built on the same side of post office in London Road.
In terms of other changes, the bakery to the northeast of the High Street was converted into a house while the construction of four new houses was complemented in the opposite side. On the School Road, a house in the north of it was removed to make room for a bank, and behind the parking a supermarket also was set up to serve local residents at the same time.
- Nowadays, more and more people want to travel to remote areas such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this type of travel outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- The charts compare changes in terms of the percentage of 4 different kinds of goods of the online shopping turnover in New Zealand during a 10-year period. 73
- The pie charts illustrate the result of a research in terms of the cultural and leisure activities that boys and girls take part in. 11
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 73
- Long distance flight uses more fuel than cars and brings pollution to the environment. We should discourage non-essential flight rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77564102564 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64658209365 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0852963218 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15818641405 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813090598038 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125401474429 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13369564714 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141566124575 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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