You have received a letter about winning a prize in a competition organised by the media house, but didn’t receive that prize. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper about it and say
– Describe the competition and prize in details.
– How do you feel about it?
– What do you expect the editor to do about it?
Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with the competition which was arranged and hosted by the media house and we have met there. The competition was on who can name all Iran’s province names within a minute and it occurred at Pars Hotel in Shiraz on 23/04/2019.
I have participated in the competition and I won the first prize, but unfortunately, I have not yet received the prize which was a cheque with a value of $1000. It supposed to be delivered to me at my address on 01/06/2019. It is now 01/07/2019 and I have not got anything yet. It made me very upset and put me in the worst situation I have ever had economically as I have bought a new car and I have no money left to pay my next rent.
Could you make a contact with the organizer and do a follow up as you have a close connection with them? I hope with your help I can receive this prize as in my current financial situation I need this money to be able to pay my next rent.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-07 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | mohamadi654094 | view | |
| 2019-12-07 | mohamadi654094 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | mohamadi654094 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...7/2019 and I have not got anything yet. It made me very upset and put me in the wo...
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Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ake a contact with the organizer and do a follow up as you have a close connection with ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68907047137 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5672525516 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219863461231 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768892049017 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723797913938 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114470683854 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349972579111 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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