More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?
it is true that some people use private automobile more than the other transportation vehicles, although there are many problems due to using private vehicles and there are much that can be done to resolve them.
On of the problem is that by using individual cars extend contamination. When the exhaust fumes in the air rise, the amount of contaminant particles extend too. The increasing air pollution brings nothing but different kind of illnesses such as various cancers or skin problems. In terms of social consequences the more cars, the more traffic. Undoubtedly streets have a limited capacity for servicing the cars on it. people who tend to use their own automobiles will decline this amount for the others prefer to use public transportation. this problem may cause many several people staggering in traffic jams and it obviously cause wasting time and as an effect of sticking in traffic people may always feel tired.
there are several ways to deal with the problems of using individual cars. One of the solution to counteract with the pollution is that there should be some centers to check and test the physical parts of the cars to perform well and by changing fuels to biofuels the amount of contamination will decline sharply. Another solution is that upgrading the devices of public transportation should be high in the government agenda, such as suitable chairs, or pleasure air conditions and beside that the format of vehicles must change to use the fastest vehicle to satisfy needs of society. Since with upgrading these facilities the people would pursue to use them more than before, therefore, the amount of cars on the streets will decline. In the other word, the streets will be vacant and the time which was spent in standing in traffic will dramatically decrease.
In conclusion, while private automobiles are more reliable in the majority of commute travels, there are some problems by using them either in health and social life of a person. By try to use the recommendation it will be a better world for both a person and the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9770773639 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7252733294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510028653295 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2523693013 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259836970687 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829761825049 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690841198251 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1677087408 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542372317232 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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