You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.
1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.
2. What type of rooms you would like.
3. Ask them how much the weekend will cost.
4. Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I am looking for the arrangements in your hotel seaside, where I am planning to visit on the upcoming weekend with my family. I am starting my journey on 12/14/2019 with four adult and two children. I am expected to reach at 10.00 am and my return ticket is on the date of 12/18/2019.
I was looking for a comfortable stay, as I am travelling with my parents and they can not climb to the stairs. so Please provide me with accommodation on the ground floor. also, we need two rooms, so I would prefer to get nearby apartments.
I saw online hotel one-day accommodation is costing 5$ to 9$. it would be a privilege if you could provide me with the complete package with the full board meal plan. also, this is the first time we are coming to Mumbai. it would be kind enough if you could help us with nearby activities or places which we could visit. my family is having an interest in a live concert. if any show is happening in our visit time; we would love to enjoy that.
I look forward to getting your reply on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am looking for the arrangements in you...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.../2019 with four adult and two children. I am expected to reach at 10.00 am and my...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ket is on the date of 12/18/2019. I was looking for a comfortable stay, as ...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s and they can not climb to the stairs. so Please provide me with accommodation on...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...with accommodation on the ground floor. also, we need two rooms, so I would prefer t...
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Line 13, column 53, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
... hotel one-day accommodation is costing 5$ to 9$. it would be a privilege if you c...
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Line 13, column 59, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
... one-day accommodation is costing 5$ to 9$. it would be a privilege if you could p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...-day accommodation is costing 5$ to 9$. it would be a privilege if you could provi...
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Line 13, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... package with the full board meal plan. also, this is the first time we are coming t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...the first time we are coming to Mumbai. it would be kind enough if you could help ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ivities or places which we could visit. my family is having an interest in a live ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s having an interest in a live concert. if any show is happening in our visit time...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isit time; we would love to enjoy that. I look forward to getting your reply on ...
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Line 21, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on this matter. Yours faithfully, A Kansal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45771144279 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55914904423 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4572719446 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121929304944 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398633921294 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405310582677 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597098644773 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461157247676 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.