Task 2: In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that incarceration is the most prevalent method to isolate dagerous crimimals who might impact harmful on society. While i agree that many goverments have to severe regislations to takle this problem. I believe that education is a better way to reduce rating of crimes.
On the one hand, there are two major reasons why imprisonment is main solution which is not replace by other solutions. Firstly, this has constantly deferential and restricted some serious consequences by crime which cause insecurity in society , for instance, terrorists, organized criminal group, corrupt officers. Secondly, goverments maintain this strict law in order to make safety enviroment for protecting their citizens, for example the goverment in singapore has strong punishment to reduce badly behaviours.
On the other hand ( however i would argue that), education is essential element for solving hard line root of crime in a long term. For aspect of government, Criminal in prison need to suffer education class, in particularly the classes concentrate on morality and specific job, which help them to easily attend society after they had been released. Futhermore, high effective system of education help people to enhance awareness in their job and it might contribute to reduce pressure for government who sustain huge budget to solve this problem, for example: japan is one of most safety countries in around the world with lowest rating of crimes.
In conclusion, although education is primary factor to build a stabilization of society, the rule should be enforced which directly affects all citizen in country.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37795275591 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86186932615 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6390889638 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137615253087 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570745852131 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525771483414 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807659330629 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428394111158 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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