You have heard and develop plans to build a shopping center near your house, write a letter to conceal, say how you heard about the plan, explain how you feel about it, ask for more information about it.
Dear sir madam,
I am habitant in Azimiyeh, who has lived in the region for years. While purchasing some things at the market near my house, I heard about your plan to construct a Mall in this area. However, the person who told the news, did not know the details of the programme about which we were curious.
Hearing the news not only was surprising for me, but also made me so glad and considerably enthusiastic to do shopping in the mall. Since I am keen on going shopping and buying goods including colourful gifts, clothes, and stationery, benefiting search Bazaar near my residence is so interesting and exciting for me. I cannot explain how much delighting the fore mentioned news was for me.
It is not clarified for me whether where the construction will be settled down or how much big it will be. I would appreciate it if I could know about the size, how many floors there will be, and what kind of stores will be located. I really would like to know about the mall and diversity of the goods I can buy there. I look forward for more information you will let me benefit from. I am absolutely grateful for your exact and quick answer, which will be get soon.
Faithfully yours,
Zeinab Khalaj.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...o shopping in the mall. Since I am keen on going shopping and buying goods including col...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...diversity of the goods I can buy there. I look forward for more information you w...
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Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...formation you will let me benefit from. I am absolutely grateful for your exact a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, thus, while, as for, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55707762557 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50716951154 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7290189541 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209439752126 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712930850014 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551670742006 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131970959 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406933293475 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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