It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
Parental protection and duties are the most important determinants in the way of children's upbringing. It is sometimes viewed that there should be a training course to be more skilled for child fostering,while many do not take it a serious prospect. I am in favour of viewpoint that parental preparation course ought to be implemented owing to positive results that can bring.
In one hand, testing and teaching the essential methods for child upbringing is a consequent way because of several reasons. To begin with, when parents get aware of diverse children's requirements and the milestones which offspring pass in different ages ,they can support offspring 's demands correctly and also affect their characters productively. This issue develops a child's personality and correspondingly makes a child grow in character,hence it can result mental stability,capability in making decision or being independent and other type of virtue in their personality. Finally it can have noteworthy effects to employ prantal preparation course in various society as to better fostering.
In other side, some hold the view that preparing classes are not practical and cannot scrutinize people in parent position well. This is argued that after training course,perhaps most of individuals will not apply the theories and consequently this work just wastes time.In addition,It requires real experience for parental skill.This means that people may pass courses successfully,while would not be able to handle child needs in actual occasion .This is therefore, attending to training course cannot have enormous impact on individuals who demand for nurturing a child.
To sum up, although fulfilling and performing the points in fostering a child are more crucial but spreading this scheme can develop more knowledge and information in society for better nurturing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53873239437 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24525464987 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637323943662 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.1689765306 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243799975453 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893370174271 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493445925453 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140819059508 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703258662526 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.