Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagrees. Discuss both views and give your opinion including relevant examples.
Choosing the best gift for an individual is quiet difficult task, as people have no idea about others' choice. When it is about giving present to teenager, monetary gift is better as believed by few humanbeings whereas other people think that instead of giving money, person should opt for the different options. In my opinion, individual should choose the gift which can asset to the younger one rather than giving money which may have detrimental effects.
To begin with, number of people choose to render monetary gifts as they want to get rid off from choosing the best gift for their dear one. However, when the recipients are younger one, and if they receive cash as a gift, it may have pessimistic effects. Such circumstances happen because teenagers have not enough maturity that which are the correct ways to spend money. For instance, teenagers do not only spend money lavishly, but also fall into bad company by which there are chances of spoiling their future. Therefore, giving money as a gift can be proven as hazardous to them.
On the other hand, providing a present which proved as significant for teenager is the best choice. In other words, people should select the gift for the teenager which can be related to their education or else the brain teaser games which are beneficial for them. For example, if person select such games for teenager, it will aid them to make their mind more active. Thus, such gifts not only assist to develop younger one's mental growth, but also act as stress-buster by playing it.
To sum up, giving monetary gift is not that bad option ;however, if an individual chose gift for the teenager,they should select it wisely rather than giving cash. In order to avoid any mishappening ,and to increase their mental power, one should choose the gifts which assist them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85852090032 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38559206772 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9141865966 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226321750052 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928481464836 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735369842332 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163405565705 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750134037639 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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