Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
when children enroll in school, teachers have surpassing impact on their growth as compared to their parents. I totally agree with this statement because children spend most of the time with teachers who do not only educate juvenile regarding academic subjects, but also assist them to develop their inferior abilities. Another fact is that, In today's fast-paced world majority of the parents are busy with their work, consequently they are not able to look after their children.
To begin with, professors are role models for their students. In other words, pupils observe their teachers that how mettle they are, and pursue exactly the same in day-to-day life. In addition, teachers render abundance of general knowledge along with their academic subjects to their students. Eventually, such particulars are beneficial for their upcoming days. For instance, school authorities organise activities which can be at academic level or the extracurricular, and by participating in such activities children develop sense of competition as well as co-operation which are tremendously aid them in their later life. Thus, guiding the children by teachers has greater effect on their growth.
On the other hand, It is undeniable that parents have equal responsibilities like teachers to enlighten their children regarding intellectual and social development.However, both the parents stay occupied with their work in the present scenario, and for this reason, even if their children are around them, they hardly find time to pay attention towards their juvenile. As a result, productive work can be lessened by children at home as they spend most Of the time in doing unnecessary activities such as watching television. Therefore, if parents do not get time to teach basic etiquette to their child, it will mitigate the level of smartness and lack in social development.
To conclude, in spite of having impact of parents on their children's growth, teachers have significant role than parents when children get admission into school as teachers are only for students in the school to provide lots of knowledge and to teach them moral values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37685459941 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90182834369 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0990566748 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.384615385 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6923076923 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319139957182 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123742078966 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751641724752 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221990011001 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507120439827 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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