Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money
In modern times, the issue of celebrities has become a matter for discussion. It has been suggested that celebrities are paid far too much money. I totally agree with this statement for reasons I will outline below.
From an overall perspective, there are wide range of reasons why people believe that celebrities are paid far too much money. From the social point of view, the primary argument supporting this idea is that it will be unfair for other essential worker such as nurses or teachers who are received low salaries. The more essential workers' dedication, the better treatment they deserve. From the practical point of view, another key argument in supporting of this idea is that most of celebrities waste their money on expensive houses, car parties. The more money celebrities contribute on charity for hospital which have shabby facility, the more high-tech device will approach. As a result, many dangerous diseases will be eradicated therefore, the life of everyone in the world will be enhance.
However, it must be said there are several arguments against the idea that it is a case of supply and demand. We create demand by going to see their concerts and buying their music. In the past you have listened either low quality of music or performance of singer whereas, nowadays from music quality to performance of concert both are high quality. As a result, you will pay amount of money for that.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. Overall, I would have to say that a agree with this idea that celebrities are paid far too much money, because of specific reason I have outlined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the celebrities') or simply say ''most celebrities''.
Suggestion: most of the celebrities; most celebrities
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93189964158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59187124178 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3399994625 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285403070132 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10599877269 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150110165795 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200260072332 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097666675329 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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