Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country.
In the letter, you should:
• include some information about the film
• explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film
• inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film
Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health. Since you are here in Pakistan for the past two months and I observed that you are fond of traveling and food. I would like to invite you to my place to watch a movie which is clearly related to your interest and contains information about beautiful spots in their country.
First of all, let me tell you more about this film. It is one of the best movies based on some fascinating information regarding cultures, places, and food from almost every nook and corner of Pakistan. Not only this, I have arranged a proper multi-media projector along with a sound system. This movie contains some really breathtaking scenes that can best be enjoyed on a bigger screen with adequate sound. In the end, to cater to your hunger, snacks, and beverages will also be available, followed by a great BBQ dinner. I hope you will accept this humble invitation and will grace my place by visiting this weekend at sharp 7:00 PM.
Anxiously waiting to see you at my place.
Yours Truly,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, regarding, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60427807487 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39500562248 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1679403537 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260097644277 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927460728526 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665961144467 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155413701644 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867519668697 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.