A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say - What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it? Brand, color, date - Why do you need it back? … traveling
- What should he/she do about it? Handover,
Hi Matrix,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing a letter to remind you about my suitcase which you had borrowed from me due to your travel to Dubai.
Let me give you a few clues, so you would be able to find it out without any hassles. If you remember, during your visit on November 19, 2019, when you did ask if I would have any suitcase because you were planning to visit Dubai for a job hunt at that point in time. I lent you a suitcase from the Zara brand which I bought during summer sales. Besides, it has a black logo on the top side of the corner and contains gray and blank colors along with long strips to carry it easily.
Now, I am traveling to France over the week for a recruitment campaign because we have recently been awarded a Giga project in MEA. Due to this, I desperately need this suitcase back as it has a secure coding lock to pack my confidential files including salary details, and project information. I would suggest you please handover my suitcase to Ali by the end of today as he is traveling to visit my house tomorrow to attend my son’s birthday. You can coordinate with him, and give him a ring at 056145909 to catch up at your convenience.
I hope to see you soon once I come back from a trip.
Your friend,
Ali
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-19 | sohailahmad | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31687242798 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38486509055 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3496380545 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4166666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281406921332 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975389577035 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567027934128 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156633220983 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045082546121 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.