Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and ‎television programs should present stories in which good people are ‎rewarded and bad people are punished.‎

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and ‎television programs should present stories in which good people are ‎rewarded and bad people are punished.‎

Without a shadow of doubt, movies’ stories can have a great effect on every individual’s ‎mood who watches them. Some people are proponents of the claim that it is better that ‎movies present their stories in a way, in which viewers would not be able to predict if the ‎good people are going to be rewarded or not and have a sense of suspension in them; ‎however, others hold the opposite perspective and believe that solely good people should ‎get rewarded at the end of the movie. The idea to which I subscribe is the latter one. My ‎viewpoint is based on quite a few reasons, two compelling ones of which have been ‎elaborated upon hereunder.‎

The first vital point to bear in mind is that having good people rewarded in movies can be ‎constructive for children. Children at a younger age are sensitive and they try to learn ‎different things and even imitate the valued behaviors. Moreover, the more children see a ‎movie character is getting praised because of his right doings, the more they would will to ‎imitate the same values of the hero of the movie. A case in point is my younger brother who ‎was a great fan of Captain America. After he watched his favorite hero’s movie, he was really ‎impressed by his heroism, as a consequence, he tried to imitate him by always helping others ‎with whatever he could.‎

The second noteworthy reason is that seeing good people prevailing over the challenges can ‎make us feel better about our life. Nowadays, we are exhausted, for we are dealing with our ‎hectic lives and most of the time we are overwhelmed with problems we are facing. Hence, ‎we need to recover not only physically, but also mentally as well and watching this sort of ‎movies can help us to recover in the appropriate manner. My own experience is a good ‎example of this matter. There was a time in my life, in which I had to cope with lots of ‎issues. I was studying really hard and at the same time, I was working at a full-time job, for I ‎needed money to pay for my studies. I remember that I was frustrated and one day I ‎watched an inspiring movie called The pursuit of happiness. It made me feel better, as I saw ‎the character rewarded for his hard work at the end of the movie.‎

In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is better for movies ‎to have good people get rewarded at the end of the story as it is constructive for ‎children and it can recover adults mentally and make them feel better in their lives.‎

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, in short, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67627494457 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8113830426 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532150776053 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.93391521 48.9658058833 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.6 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0666666667 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197117170375 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620298292083 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710877341981 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133576323818 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669229938102 0.0645574589148 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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