Discuss both sides of working both parents or only one of them, then give your opinion.
In modern era, this issue has become a matter of discussion due to all parents prefer to work so that enhance the income of the family itself. Thus, in this case parents divide into two parts, some of them support the idea that both parents should work while the others prefer the opposite of this matter. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support me viewpoint.
Parents who prefer to work and leave their children for someone will take care of them think from another side of the results. They believe that they can compensate their children anything they lose during absenting. So they will buy a lot of toys and travel with them because the income of the family became high ignoring all the negative sides.
On the other hand those who prefer to stay one of them with the children. They say that absenting the parents can leave a lot of gabs in the children's heart. As well as, they perceive what adversely happen during nothingness of censorship such as practicing bad habits or doing anything danger, in the worst cases maybe firing or catastrophic wounds.
From what have mention above and as far as I am concerned, stay the parents with children can make a lot of positive aspects and few of downsides that can make the parents regret all the life. The income is necessary , but from my overall perspective I see that but the children under the censorship and the taking care of them is more important in their childhood and in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63773584906 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35122051028 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1876551079 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.727272727 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166375280059 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617628687093 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059207430678 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952366672125 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476815465682 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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