You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The trends in fashion and clothing are hard to wear by people moreover, their sole objective is to sell their clothing. Certain individuals have an opinion that people should wear dresses in which they feel more confident and comfortable. In my opinion, I do believe that the dressing style of people should be according to their taste and personality.
In present time many famous designers exhibit their clothing designs on big m=platforms such as The Milan and The Paris fashion week. The pattern and style of dresses that models wear Is very difficult for a normal person to carry because of their unusual designs. Moreover, the designs, colours and styles change every year thus making people to spend a lion’s portion of their salary in purchasing these clothes. Actors and actresses undoubtedly spend lakhs to purchase and wear these dresses in award functions and parties in order to remain in publicity and to maintain their reputation in the glamourous world.
However, I believe that people should wear dresses which makes them feel relaxes. Every person has a different personality and fashion identity; hence they should not copy others. They should wear dresses in which they feel more self-assured. Furthermore, instead of spending enormous part of their income on purchasing clothes, they should save money for future uncertainties and invest in profitable schemes. Additionally, it is undeniable true that whatever is shown in vogue fashion magazines and fashion channels by designers will always suit your body, as everyone has different physique and it is not sure that If it is looking good on fashion models it will look good on you. So people should not spend their money in wasteful and extravagant clothing
In my opinion, I vehemently agree that people should dress according to their taste and preference rather than wearing uncomfortable clothes to please the society and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21682847896 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67628344191 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2826674924 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232446247159 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955475480006 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453822659411 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142167924649 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569275871233 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.