write a letter to an English-speaking friend. in your letter
-explain why you have changed jobs
-describe your new jobs
-tell him/her your other news
Dear Frank and John,
I hope you guys are fine. I'm just writing to let you know that I have received the photos of our holiday in Singapore.
You are such an incredible photographer.
I can't thank you enough for sending me the photographs. The trip was one of the memorable trips for me.
It is such a beautiful place with varieties of cafes. out of all, I like Disney world most, it reminds me of our childhood cartoons that we watched together.
I'm sorry it has taken me so long to write back and thank you. As soon as I landed back in the UK and joined my job,
my senior manager took leaves for a month. So, I had to complete the big assignment.
Anyways, I'm so excited to tell you that I bought a new apartment in Birmingham. There are various amenities provided,
such as a swimming pool, golf club, a hall for watching movies, etc. I would like to invite you both to pack your bags
and visit my new apartment.
Take care and do send me your flight details so that I can pick you guys from the airport.
Harry.
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| 2019-12-23 | kajal juneja | 64 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Frank and John, I hope you guys are fine. Im just writin...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d John, I hope you guys are fine. Im just writing to let you know that I hav...
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...such an incredible photographer. I cant thank you enough for sending me the pho...
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Line 13, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Out
...eautiful place with varieties of cafes. out of all, I like Disney world most, it re...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...cartoons that we watched together. Im sorry it has taken me so long to write ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...plete the big assignment. Anyways, Im so excited to tell you that I bought a ...
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Line 23, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. There are various amenities provided, such as a swimming pool, golf club, a h...
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Line 25, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., such as a swimming pool, golf club, a hall for watching movies, etc. I would...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... to invite you both to pack your bags and visit my new apartment. Take care...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42564102564 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41230682016 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4207303952 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6428571429 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151636373469 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484315872742 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455635134899 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547536952539 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401851156537 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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