The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by hop on Tue, 12/24/2019 - 23:50

The line graph illustrates the number of Underground Station passengers London-based from 6.00 am to 22.00 pm.

Overall, it is clear that people of Underground Station show some fluctuation in all times with the highest point at 8.00 am and the lowest point at 16.00 pm.

As we can shown that, the figure for passenger at 6.00 am around 100 passengers and reach a peak of 400 at 8.00 am. A significant decrease from 400 to nearly 200 are seen in the number of people Underground Station between 8.00 am and 10.00 am. This number increase considerably from 190 passengers to exactly 300 passengers at 14.00 pm before falling dramatically under 100 at 16.00pm. London Underground Station passengers shows an upward trend approximately 400 people at 18.00 pm. The number of passengers saw a quickly decline to 110 passengers at 20.00 pm and this figure has variation after 20.00 pm.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ondon-based from 6.00 am to 22.00 pm. Overall, it is clear that people of Unde...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am and the lowest point at 16.00 pm. As we can shown that, the figure for pas...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'show' or 'be shown'?
Suggestion: show; be shown
...st point at 16.00 pm. As we can shown that, the figure for passenger at 6.00 ...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quickly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
... 18.00 pm. The number of passengers saw a quickly decline to 110 passengers at 20.00 pm and this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91333333333 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85280368916 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 18.7834056159 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163528876535 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110340741443 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594326391583 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143850710312 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578288800506 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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