Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
After creation of computers, human's life becomes easier. In the period of last ten decades, a few arguments are given by a computer for most important development . I agree with this statement and here I will discuss why I agree ? and which reasons .
Generally, a computer has been made more comfortable in human's life. It is doing all work very easily and it is useful in many fields. After development of a computer, technical field became more successful. Technical companies use a computer for create some systematic and right work. For example, program created in a computer and this program is direct connected to a machine, therefor; a machine is automatic operating with systematically. Furthermore, many software have been created in a computer like in the design fields, so any design is made by people easily. In instance, one design software has been created by a computer. This software names Autocad, which draw accurate drawing , shows some 3D drawing of building before construction .
Computers are useful for maintaining data without risk of lost and this data we saved for a long time. For example, banks are working on computers; which saved all data of transactions securely.
Furthermore, in the last hundred years, many things were invented on the planet, but they did not take a place as a computer. For example, a mobile is also most important development, but it's not doing all works like a computer.
In conclusion, a computer are powerful part in human life . In this essay , I have been discussed some reasons to why I agree with no other inventions were create same as a computer in the period of last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95289855072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8565708469 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0817387691 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204739306622 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643189718481 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513098124338 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130355518405 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471686116827 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.