Life was simpler wihout so much of technology. Do you agree ?
People of the world should thank advanced technology for its immense contribution to the society as it has made our lives easier, faster and convenient. However, despite it's positives there is dark and ugly side of it that causes many negative effects.
First and foremost thing is technology affecting our social lives as people are always glued to their mobiles and laptops while travelling and walking instead of enjoying natures beauty. Also, they prefer not to start a new conversation with people around. Secondly, excessive usage of technology leads to sedentary life style through which new health problems like eye dryness, posture problems, heart issues and obesity is increasing day by day. As a repercussion for all the above stated facts, the average longevity of living years is rapidly decreasing.
Form simple to complex, we rely on technology. For instance, students for projects and solving mathematic problems they google for answers which is inturn affecting their critical thinking skills. Mean while, machines and robotic technology has replaced people who eventually lead to unsecured future for upcoming generations. Another most important thing to mention is people often write emails to closed ones which seldom lead to misunderstandings leaving relationships to hang vulnerable.
In my opinion, though they are many benefits of modern technology, negatives outweigh the positives. Finally, I agree with the statement that life would be more simpler without so much of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...fecting their critical thinking skills. Mean while, machines and robotic technology has re...
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Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...e with the statement that life would be more simpler without so much of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5321888412 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81761536167 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708154506438 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2190801486 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10144987925 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428785136519 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987708036728 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813458539968 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119395600779 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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