Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that, along with the development of technology I recent decades, the number of online meeting and training business has increased. Although, there are negative consequences of this development, I would argue that the advantages of this object are more than drawbacks.
Two of the most benefits of online meeting have mentioned as follow. Firstly, individuals will not have need to go out home for reaching to the workplace in order to attend in meeting. As a result of this is that, people can save in time, and they will have opportunity so as to program another activity. Secondly, individuals usually use from personal car for going to the workplace. This subject might lead to the heavy traffics specially in large cities. One result of this is, increasing pollution driven from emission toxic fumes of vehicles exhaust that cause deleterious problem for people healthy.
However, this technology may cause some problems for individuals. Lack of face to face communication particularly in meeting business may be caused that some problem remind unresolved. For example, about the performance a new project in company, it needs to presentation a lot of documents and data that in online meeting there is not such possible. Likewise, about the training business, since there is not possible to reply to tutor question, therefore it may be not benefit sufficiently as the same as present classes.
In summarize, despite the fact that online meeting has some drawbacks, however I believe that the benefits of using this development is greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87790467121 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3543348698 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184094137477 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603133866059 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574914666334 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127892592303 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899824113891 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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