A company has announced that it wish to build a large factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. do you support or oppose the factory. explain your position.
The growth of every community is depending on the self-development of community. In my opinion the industrialization is one of the major factors in development of community. When any industry or company establish near any community, the community has several good and bad effect on the people's of community. In following essay, I will explain few main advantages and disadvantages of company establish near my community.
Starting with advantages of company build near community. Any company need employee for its superior working. When company build near the community, company has got more employees with less pay scale and the community’s people get employment. When people got money they always try to improve their living life style and the effect of that community start developing. The company offer large amount of employment. The large-scale industry is depending on many small-scale industries. Hence it is better opportunity to development of more small-scale businesses which are depend on the large factory. There are also build hotels for residential purpose of company gust.
On the other hand the establishment of company near the community has some disadvantages. Any manufacturing industry has some of their by-product which are harmful for the people. The chemical company has there by-product is liquid chemicals, these by-product is not manage well and directly send to the river or dam is much harmful to human as well as other animals. It is also cause of cancer and the death of any animal. The second and most important is company also cause of air pollution. Manufacturing industry produce many poisonous gases, when these gases is directly pass in environment without filtering then it do many health problem to human. It is cause of lungs problem to human as well as breathing problem is also happened due to air pollution.
In my opinion the factory build near community is always grateful. Because the advantages of establishing company near the community is much greater than disadvantages. The company also neglect these disadvantages with their well plane and good management. The building of large factory is providing large employment also it improves life style of people's. Also it cause of development of new small-scale industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The growth of every community is dependi...
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... The growth of every community is depending on the self-development of community. I...
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... company establish near my community. Starting with advantages of company buil...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
...community start developing. The company offer large amount of employment. The large-s...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
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...of employment. The large-scale industry is depending on many small-scale industries. Hence i...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...pending on many small-scale industries. Hence it is better opportunity to development...
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Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: depended
...f more small-scale businesses which are depend on the large factory. There are also bu...
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... residential purpose of company gust. On the other hand the establishment of c...
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...s there by-product is liquid chemicals, these by-product is not manage well and directly send to...
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...quid chemicals, these by-product is not manage well and directly send to the river or ...
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Suggestion: caused
...an as well as other animals. It is also cause of cancer and the death of any animal. ...
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...n environment without filtering then it do many health problem to human. It is cau...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...nvironment without filtering then it do many health problem to human. It is cause of lungs ...
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... also happened due to air pollution. In my opinion the factory build near com...
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...uild near community is always grateful. Because the advantages of establishing company ...
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Suggestion: Also,
...also it improves life style of peoples. Also it cause of development of new small-sc...
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Suggestion: causes
...improves life style of peoples. Also it cause of development of new small-scale indus...
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Line 7, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...elopment of new small-scale industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32686980609 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09806272514 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445983379501 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0875888155 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0416666667 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208004664817 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708832237747 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650905087578 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144133990269 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634138814662 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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