You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and forgot your watch there.Write a letter to him/her and say Thank him/her for the weekend stay.Describe your watch and where you could have left it.Suggest a way how to get it back.َ
Dear behzad,
Hope you have a good day. Are you okay with your family? You are wondering why I wrote you a letter.Although I was at home last week.
I really thank you for preparing for a great weekend. I never imagined I could attend my favorite singer's concert.I tell you that I have forgotten to put my watch in your house. I remember putting it by the pool and as we rushed to the concert, I left the pool.I was so excited about going to this concert and I was surprised after the concert. When I got home, I remembered that I hadn't wear my watch.
This is a reminder of my mom and I love it so much. Please pack it properly and send it to me by post. Because the postage is more convenient than sending it by bus.I think you can do it without any problem.
I hope to see you soon in Sydney.
Yours’ Lovingly,
Soheil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... are wondering why I wrote you a letter.Although I was at home last week. I really ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are wondering why I wrote you a letter.Although I was at home last week. I really ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ould attend my favorite singers concert.I tell you that I have forgotten to put m...
^
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould attend my favorite singers concert.I tell you that I have forgotten to put m...
^
Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orgotten to put my watch in your house. I remember putting it by the pool and as ...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... rushed to the concert, I left the pool.I was so excited about going to this conc...
^
Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... rushed to the concert, I left the pool.I was so excited about going to this conc...
^
Line 9, column 383, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...t. When I got home, I remembered that I hadnt wear my watch. This is a reminder ...
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Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it properly and send it to me by post. Because the postage is more convenient than sen...
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Line 13, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... more convenient than sending it by bus.I think you can do it without any problem...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32298136646 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48524832593 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2763888649 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2440243237 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889380992969 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663461640388 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128269277887 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729846562526 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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