International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
In present days, It is true that an abroad trip is quite affordable. Also, there are growing tendency that legal authorities are applying many welcoming policies for foreign travelers. While this has several drawbacks, I believe that overall the benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, the development of tourism offers opportunities for the economy growth. With a developing tourism, a country could attract more investing capitals from other nations. , such country also receive much more taxes from tourism companies. These have results in augmenting the state budget, which allows a nation to ensure citizens’ lives by building more public facilities such as schools, hospitals to name just a few.
Apart from the argument I mentioned above, I also assert that tourism companies afford opportunities for people to secure jobs. With the rapid rise, business owners need a colossal number of labour force, which leads to the decrease in the rate of unemployment. This has a great meaning in alleviating social evils, especially in the rate of crime.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that tourism industry has some negative impacts on the environments. Some travelers usually pay no attention to protecting our environment. For example, while citizens are trying to preserve tourist attractions, some tourists are littering indiscriminately or poaching cultural heritages in such places. However, with appropriate punishment, I advocate that this situation could be controlled.
Despite the positive effects I indicated, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of welcoming more foreign tourists negate the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... investing capitals from other nations. , such country also receive much more tax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06255555826 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.053605004 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152635492988 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477762118356 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518631154773 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716160251124 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050137458576 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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