Some people believe that having access to the internet is necessary to live a full life today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the today’s world, the internet have become an essential part of everyday life. The opinion exists that the internet is a compulsory thing that people can not live without. This essay will discuss the reality of the internet that have crucial effect on our life.
From an overall perspective, there are a number of reasons why people believe that being connected to the internet is a necessary. The primary argument supporting this idea is that in these days, people are using the internet as main communication tool. Unless the past, they are able to being connected with each others all the time, without regardless of how they far away. Secondly, the media has been recreated by the internet. The conventional methods of media, such as printed news papers, magazines are not exist any more. Today, If people want to get information about news, research project and want to watch a movie or documentary, they need internet. Another arguments for some countries, such as Turkey, people have been offered to apply for government issues by using internet, and this is considered a time saving feature for them.
On the other hand, unlike those arguments, some people are still thinking that they can maintain their life without having access to the internet. In a way, they could be right. The humankinds had not been having internet access for almost ten thousand years and they have still been existed up to now.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea that the internet connection have a undeniable place in our life. However, it is not mandatory to making people alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
... printed news papers, magazines are not exist any more. Today, If people want to get ...
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Line 15, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... idea that the internet connection have a undeniable place in our life. However, ...
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Line 15, column 136, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
...r life. However, it is not mandatory to making people alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9925093633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54948637318 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0481566206 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270371730605 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928504504033 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609304905293 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183304722092 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329770674572 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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