Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?
In present time, technology is geting more and more advance. Education system is also updating with feniminas gizmos, same the other side book reading is an boaring activity for children. In present time television is also a way of learning; however, other people think that television cannot take a place of book for learning, and that is a reason why childern have less - educated nowadays. I believe that the book is more essential way of learning rather then television, so I partially agree this statement; and reasons of my inclination are elaborated in trailed paragraphs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...os, same the other side book reading is an boaring activity for children. In prese...
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Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...s more essential way of learning rather then television, so I partially agree this s...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...en their memory power and consentration also. Book reading can not only increase flu...
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Line 13, column 215, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
.... Many channels are make children about on going senario of world and also give informat...
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Line 17, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a year a local physiology collage make an geneal debates on some prectical analys...
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Line 17, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ctical analysis, the difference between a children who watching television and the childre...
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Line 17, column 261, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ws that the children who read more book then watching television they have good scor...
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Line 21, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...earn but by reading a book children can many benefit : good memory, sharp mind, good communi...
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Line 21, column 234, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...that television has some advarce effect also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19168591224 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70663273234 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480369515012 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3564625869 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.315789474 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226193566828 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086052462385 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456597443571 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1368502349 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503733945584 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.